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Dragon Flower: Pages 3 + 4 by Zilleniose Dragon Flower: Pages 3 + 4 by Zilleniose
Sorry, I forgot to mention (Though the pages before kind of gave it away), That you read from right to left, like authentic manga style. :3

Yay Ayame makes her entrance! 8D

Pages 1 + 2 : [link]

Dragon Flower (c) Me
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poke-person14 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2009
So cute! I'm subscribing! Please write more! ^____^
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The-one-who-listens Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2008
Waah you're so good with anatomy x3
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wlkingtoadstool Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2007
this is amazing, and i have no critique on your drawing, but being the ridiculous editor that i am, klutz is spelled with a k.

otherwise, totally freakin awesome
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ShadowDemon101 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2007
YAY X3 :dance:
Wow this is great beginning :nod:
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emirosu Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2007   Writer
You draw feet really well xD

Looking forward to the rest of your manga!!
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Zilleniose Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you! (I hate feet xDD They always come out deformed to me )
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emirosu Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2007   Writer
lol

Well, you're definitely better than I am in that respect.
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broken0dream Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2007
Ayame looks really cute! I love how her skirt flows.
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Zilleniose Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you! <3
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broken0dream Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2007
You're welcome. ^^
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DarkHalo4321 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2007  Student General Artist
Sweet start. :D The introduction is good. I like how her skirt looks all flowy and flippy :D
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LuverOfAnimeAndDP Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2007
This is pretty good. I like Ayame's style, and how you made Ayame just an ordinary human.... so far. Some people like to give their main character freaky powers or pasts that they never knew of, seeming to forget that ordinaary humans can be great too. (AYAME IS SO CUTE !!!X3 ) can't wait for next page.
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Zilleniose Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well, so far in my mind this is gonna be more of a 'slice of life' kind of manga, but with a bit of magical twist. Nothing extraordinary planned, just cute stuff. <3 So you can be pretty sure Ayame's just a normal girl.
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Eternal-Voice Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2007
as always, wonderful!!! i really like Ayame, she is still so cute. and i really like your style. although, is it okay if you make the pages a little bigger? like the last pages? it's kinda hard for me to read...

only if you want to. if not, i'll just squint *grins*
i can't wait until she meets Flo!!!
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Zilleniose Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Don't they get bigger? *Checks* Oh crap, I forgot to make them normal size. Check it again - they're going to be the same size as the first two unless I screw up again XD
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Eternal-Voice Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2007
yes, much better. thank you.
im really enjoying the pages so far
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drowning-lilly Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2007  Student
Yay! *happy dance* Your style is really captivating. I can't wait for another update!
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Zilleniose Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you!! <3
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